A Yankee's Musing

Saturday, January 02, 2010

a quiet reflection

A quiet reflection like a blue moon night in a snow storm
non-forgiving bitter fingers caress
demanding vigilence not there
counting backwards was never my forte.

Punctuation stops the natural flow of meaning
causing accusations of run on sentences
followed closely by a clause that never finds
a servicable noun
I sprinkle lightly with commas.

A Yankee muses forgetable thoughts
hard learnings forge paths
negotiated but not forgotten
scars and wrinkles map
directions that may or may not
determine tomorrows.

This is a story poem at best
or bad prose perhaps
but this journey seems to demand
a seeding of words.

1 Comments:

  • At 1:04 PM, Blogger roseduncan said…

    Really nice to be able to read this and other posts. I'm going to try and keep up. And keep up with you, you Yankee!

     

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